Love Lives Beyond the Tomb
Beyond vs. lies in
Clare shifts from 'beyond' (transcendent) to 'lies in' (immanent). Love both outlasts death and inhabits ordinary life—he's arguing both directions at once.
Eve's dews may weep
Biblical Eve, not evening. Clare personifies the first woman as mourning—original sin and sorrow enter the poem, but love persists 'delightful' anyway.
Angels wing
Missing apostrophe—'angels' not 'angel's.' Spring arrives on multiple wings, a collective angelic force. Clare often drops punctuation for speed.
Nature's choice
Unusual phrasing—nature actively chooses this voice. Not 'nature's voice' but her deliberate selection of the meeting place between spring and lovers.
Young added
Final stanza adds 'young' to the list of love's qualities. The poem itself has aged from start to finish—love gains youth while everything else fades.